First of all Nelson dont get no lost. It is a very powerful and very unique hop. It will make its presence known. Secondly, I really like everything about the recipe except the lack of a dry hop. The hop combination will be very very nice IMO. I could nitpick where the hops are added and such but really I think that it needs a dry hop. Maybe 2oz Simcoe and 1 oz each of Citra and Nelson. I think I would like that ratio. With that dry hop you could back of a bit on the kettle additions and be very happy too.
And fasttrack this baby because it looks like great hot weather beer!
I had a dry hop in mind and it's not out of the question. I have 2 ounces of Citra, 3 of Nelson and one each of Zythos and Simcoe. So I could dry hop with an ounce each of Nelson and Citra but after that, I don't think I have any more of
these varieties and I wouldn't want to introduce another one. The dry hop idea was floating above my head but I wasn't sure what I wanted to do with it. If I added one ounce each of Citra and Nelson, what would you do with the kettle additions? Better yet... why don't you be a dear and rewrite the hop schedule with the 7 ounces I mentioned?
This is much more your area than mine.
EDIT: Actually I think I have 2 ounces of Simcoe left.